Land of Love

20 Mar

There is something unheard,

about a land somewhere below earth.

There people love, and only love.

Not like here, where its in dearth.

No trust, no message of peace,

no eating together, no drink indeed.

no magic of golden three love,

all we have plastic smiles to creep.

for that place,looking for a hole,

somewhere, where no gate have no gateman.

where she waits with eyes ringed with kohl.

Where there is love and love alone.

2 Responses to “Land of Love”

  1. sameer thukral March 23, 2009 at 10:53 pm #

    where she waits with eyes ringed with kohl.

    its a beautiful line..

    me wrote a poem about kohl lined eyes too!
    *we-r-in-the-same-category-feeling*

  2. kartik trivedi March 24, 2009 at 10:40 am #

    arrey baba…humari to abhi bhi category…SRTM hai (single ready to mingle)… I agree that line is good…but this is one of the worst poems i have ever written…still…thanks…

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